I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi my name is Mia from Marshland School. I like your friendship spray slide and I thought it was great animation and humour. This reminded me of what a good friend should be.I think the speech would be easier to read if the text was bigger. Maybe next time you could more ingredients to the recipe ?
Thank you Mia I thought it was just to silly to smash a cup with a hammer instead of pouring, I'll try making the speech and the text, probably I don't have time to add more ingredients, but thank you for your advice.
Kamusta Steph, Shyla your "trusted" friend here, These slides are really cool. It made me laugh because you put the TROLLFACE in. Classic you, Steph. This reminded me of when you showed me it in person. Blog ya later Stephanie!
Thank you Shyla, I really like your comment and I am glad that I have reminded you this, I put the trollface in twice which is a mistake but i am also glad you laughed, Blog you later too.
Kia Ora Logan, Thank you for the kind and short comment, I worked on the blogging slide at home and I did the animation at school, I always asked if I can do the animation all the time so I think thats why its long.
Kia ora Stephanie, I really like your Friendship spray and the troll face is very funny. next time you also can make a funniest troll face and byebye...
Selamat pagi Phoebe, I am thankful that you really like the trollfaces probably I could add even funnier faces but I probably should only put one on each animation or it will get tiring.
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Mia from Marshland School. I like your friendship spray slide and I thought it was great animation and humour. This reminded me of what a good friend should be.I think the speech would be easier to read if the text was bigger. Maybe next time you could more ingredients to the recipe ?
Thank you Mia I thought it was just to silly to smash a cup with a hammer instead of pouring, I'll try making the speech and the text, probably I don't have time to add more ingredients, but thank you for your advice.
DeleteKamusta Steph, Shyla your "trusted" friend here,
ReplyDeleteThese slides are really cool. It made me laugh because you put the TROLLFACE in. Classic you, Steph. This reminded me of when you showed me it in person.
Blog ya later Stephanie!
Thank you Shyla, I really like your comment and I am glad that I have reminded you this, I put the trollface in twice which is a mistake but i am also glad you laughed, Blog you later too.
Deletekia ora Stephanie, it'is logan how do you make a long slide and it's amazing .
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Logan, Thank you for the kind and short comment, I worked on the blogging slide at home and I did the animation at school, I always asked if I can do the animation all the time so I think thats why its long.
DeleteKia ora Stephanie, I really like your Friendship spray and the troll face is very funny. next time you also can make a funniest troll face and byebye...
ReplyDeleteSelamat pagi Phoebe, I am thankful that you really like the trollfaces probably I could add even funnier faces but I probably should only put one on each animation or it will get tiring.
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