FIRE On Port Hills
In March, 2017, two fires spread across the Port hills. one is believed to have started by an Electrical problem between some wires.
People felt devastated and some houses were destroyed. Lots of people were coughing. They were worried about their homes, pets and families. The firefighters used ponds, pools, buckets and hoses to put the fire out. The victims of the fire were people who lost houses, firefighters, David Askin a pilot who died in the fires, christchurch people, farmers, animals and pets.There was a lot of smoke everywhere. people tried to put out the fire but it was hopeless. four hundred and fifty people evacuated during the fire.I felt sorry for the people who evacuated during the fire, but right now they are rebuilding their lives and being with their families and friends.
What a great opening with those dramatic pictures. I just had to read your story. You really hocked me in. Loved the words like devastated. Loved the words you used like victims also.
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ReplyDeleteyour story is really good you used a lot of wow words and full stops good job I really enjoyed it.
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ReplyDeleteit was really scary :-()
ReplyDeleteWOW. THAT'S SO AMAZING i love your exspreshion on your port hills fire you have done amazing stephanie
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That is a really cool. I like your fire story I like the pictures of the fire. And I like how you wrote quite a lot of sentences. And you have got alot of detail.
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ReplyDeleteThis is AMAZING Stephanie!I Liked how you use WOW words in this story.Maybe you could focus on having capital letters in the story because I noticed one mistake in the story at one is believed but it was after a fullstop right? So this is how it was supposed to be One is believed.
ReplyDeleteSO FANTASTIC STEPHANIE I LOVE IT SO MACH THE FIRE STORY NICE KEEP IT UP STEPHANIE.
ReplyDeleteThank you for all these amazing comments! I am so pleased of all these good comments.
ReplyDeleteHety there it is Ruavai Here At Gilberthorpe school your story is really good you used a lot of wow words and full stops good job I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteHi stephanie I like your story about the port hills fire but next time you can put capitters.
ReplyDeleteHello Stephanie, This is a great story. I loved the great words you used to describe how the people were feeling and how their houses were destroyed. Kai pai keep it up blog ya later.
ReplyDeleteNamaste Stephanie Emily here.
ReplyDeleteI think that this is a great quality story. I love the words that you have included in here especially devastated, I didn't even use that word. I love how you have used different colours and the photos or really hard to look at.
blog ya later!!
Hi Sonny here and I like what you added.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Stephanie
ReplyDeleteChloe here just checking out your blog and i am already blowen away by all the dicriptive words just by looking and reading your blog you writing is almost as good as some of the teachers I'm saying that in a good way.Maybe next time add how you know all of this.Was it from the news?Or from the internet?
Ill blog you later bye
Kia ora Stephanie
ReplyDeleteSafiyya here amazing work.Maybe you could say how the second fire started??
Hi stephanie!
ReplyDeleteI love how you care about people and I can see that you do care about people because you said people were coughing.
why did you put it in different colours?
blog u later!