I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
My name is Mikey. I'm a member of the Summer Learning Journey team this year and I'll be commenting on some of your wonderful blog posts over the summer. It's so great to see that you've made a start on the teaser week activities - well done! :)
I really like the way you've presented this activity. You've actually done it a bit differently to the other students I've seen which is really cool. You've come up with some awesome ideas here. I really like the water park idea. That would be a great place to spend the summer. What would the playground look like? Would there be lots of slides going into the water? I'd love to hear a bit more about it!
Congratulations on completing your first teaser task! Remember that the programme officially begins on Monday (December 16th), so be sure to check out the Week 1 activities then.
Kia Ora Steph, This is an amazing blog post! This is different SLJ activity from what we were supposed to do, so that makes it amazing! Next time you could add more detail. But great job!
Hi Stephanie its Alizae here I loved how you put loads of detail I love It maybe you could put more info about her and other stuff but great job Stephanie.
Hey Stephanie, I really like your blog post because of the fact that you used some slides to show what you are learning about. One thing you could do is have a little bit more of the Helen Clark situations.
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Kia ora Stephanie!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mikey. I'm a member of the Summer Learning Journey team this year and I'll be commenting on some of your wonderful blog posts over the summer. It's so great to see that you've made a start on the teaser week activities - well done! :)
I really like the way you've presented this activity. You've actually done it a bit differently to the other students I've seen which is really cool. You've come up with some awesome ideas here. I really like the water park idea. That would be a great place to spend the summer. What would the playground look like? Would there be lots of slides going into the water? I'd love to hear a bit more about it!
Congratulations on completing your first teaser task! Remember that the programme officially begins on Monday (December 16th), so be sure to check out the Week 1 activities then.
Bye for now,
Mikey :)
Kia Ora Steph,
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing blog post! This is different SLJ activity from what we were supposed to do, so that makes it amazing! Next time you could add more detail. But great job!
Hi Stephanie its Alizae here I loved how you put loads of detail I love It maybe you could put more info about her and other stuff but great job Stephanie.
ReplyDeleteHey Stephanie,
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post because of the fact that you used some slides to show what you are learning about. One thing you could do is have a little bit more of the Helen Clark situations.
Keep up the good work,
Quaid