I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Stephanie I’m Daisy from Marsh;and School. I love your Friendship Cupcake recipe because it really shows a what a good friend should be like. Did you think of adding fun to your recipe or do you just think a friend doesn’t necessarily have to be fun. Why did you put angriness and sadness on there, do you think friends should be angry?
Well thank you for commenting on my blog, Thank for your advice, I'll update it later, I don't know if they could be angry, I have a question, Why is the second comment deleted?
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Hi Stephanie I’m Daisy from Marsh;and School. I love your Friendship Cupcake recipe because it really shows a what a good friend should be like. Did you think of adding fun to your recipe or do you just think a friend doesn’t necessarily have to be fun. Why did you put angriness and sadness on there, do you think friends should be angry?
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ReplyDeleteWell thank you for commenting on my blog, Thank for your advice, I'll update it later, I don't know if they could be angry, I have a question, Why is the second comment deleted?
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