I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kiaora Stephanie, Aryan here checking out your blog! This is a really good story! Next time make it a bit bigger so it's easier to read. Anyways, see you later!
Hi Stephani it's Siyona here from Rimu class I like your startting Written by ...... maby next time make a slide because it is kind of hard to read because I try too read it but the writingpass away but it is A good diffrent presentachon blog you later .
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Kiaora Stephanie, Aryan here checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good story!
Next time make it a bit bigger so it's easier to read.
Anyways, see you later!
Hi Stephani it's Siyona here from Rimu class
ReplyDeleteI like your startting Written by ......
maby next time make a slide because it is kind of hard to read because I try too read it but the writingpass away but it is A good diffrent presentachon blog you later .