I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Stephanie this is Jaren I liked the way how you revealed your history before even talking about it. Next time could you just write on Kiwi can lots of fun games because you put lot of fun games.
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Hi Stephanie this is Jaren I liked the way how you revealed your history before even talking about it. Next time could you just write on Kiwi can lots of fun games because you put lot of fun games.
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