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Monday 3 July 2017

Persuade Writing With Fidget Spinners On our School

In class we were learning to write persuasive writing about Fidget spinners and I chose against the “No’’ here are the ideas I can come up with.

I strongly think that we should be allowed to use fidget spinners in the classroom.

My first point is fidget spinners are allowed when you play them sensibly and not get in trouble. My second point is when your screen is loading you can play with them when you’re bored.
My third point is  when there is no sports gear at playtime you can use your fidget spinner when you are waiting to have a turn on the gear.
My fourth point is you can also use your spinner when you are having a stress.
My fifth point is when your hand is tired use a fidget spinner because you can’t do anything with that hand and when you use it to much it needs a rest.
Point 6. When you are waiting to have a turn on something you can play with your spinner.
Point 7.
They are fun because there are lots of types of them and you can choose which one you can have.


That is why I believe that Spinners are definitely are allowed at our class for something to play with.   Image result for only signSencibly

1 comment:

  1. Wow Stephanie you have HEAPS of reasons why we should have fidget spinners at school. So many that you have almost convinced me... almost!! There are a lot of gaps in this which meant I had to scroll lots so that I could read the rest, could you fix this up please :)

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