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Wednesday 1 March 2017

If I were in charge of the world

If I was in charge of the world I’d cancel school and butter

If I were in charge of the world there’d be holidays in every day and spicy noodles restaurants

If I were in charge of the world you wouldn’t have to  pay for anything

You wouldn’t have any bullies

You wouldn’t have people being criminals

Or you wouldn’t have any violence

If I were in charge of the world I would add fruit shops everywhere and have  no-one telling you what to do
And sometimes a person who sometimes forgot to send  mail

And sometimes forgot to show my work

Would still be allowed to be in charge of the world.

15 comments:

  1. Hey Stephanie, Sounds like you really want to be in charge of the world I would love you to be in charge of the world kai pai :)

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  2. Hi stephanie it's me Elham.
    I like how you said If I were in charge of the world there’d be holidays in every day and spicy noodles restaurants.
    Next time put a picture of something or yourself.

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  3. Hi Stephanie, it's Mrs Pam. I like that you have put all the things you don't like in red. I like that you would have fruit shops everywhere. I think I would like it if you were in charge of the world.

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  4. Can I have my holiday now please ? I think it would be aa great idea to have holidays every day. Please take charge of the world very soon .

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  5. Why do you put lines under the words but nice job. by bailey

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  6. wow is is balsa stephanie i dot thik i kid do this

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  7. Hi Stephanie Its Chrysler I think you have done a great job I think you have done amazing, But I think you need Butter because it is what sticks the bread together. I think I would cancel Snakes and tigers.

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  8. I really liked how you said you would cancel school and there would holidays every day well done

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  9. I would do some of that stuff to stephanie if I were in charge of the world. that is cool. :)

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  10. that's just amazing. you have made a spalling mistake but its' still amazing
    :) :) :) :) :) :) :0 love it

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  11. kia ora stephanie I like how you said we can have a holiday every day please can I have a holiday remember fall stops you have only got one BYE

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  12. I like it Stephanie
    Hey There I am (Ruavai) at Gilberthorpe school.
    I think you have done a great job I think you have done amazing, But I think you need Butter because it is what sticks the bread together. I think I would cancel Snakes and tigers.
    Keep the good work up.

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  13. Bonjour Stephanie Sita here.
    Some of those things are really cool but maybe you shouldent make it that there is no school because we need to learn a lot of things to get a good education! I like how you said that there would be no crimanals that would be really good for the world to have. I have a question, why wouldent you have any butter in the world we wont be able to have yummy things like cake and things like that?
    Keep up the FANTASTIC work!
    Byeeee :):):)

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  14. This is great stephanie,
    I like how you have this if we did not have to pay for anything then we dont need money and some of us like school I like how you have done lot's of friut stores that would be amazing
    that's all for now byeee

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  15. Hey Stephanie it's TJ from rimu class I like how you did the story really good keep it up I hope see you at school some time. Bye now TJ out.

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